Just to let everyone know you can still link me to your writings if it's not getting commented on, criticized, or of the like. It's really hard to get people to read your works, I know. I can understand to an extent. It's easy to open a picture glance at it for 2 seconds then move on, but with poems and stories it actually requires reading and some don't want to spend the extra minute doing so.
Just send me a link in my comments asking me to take a look at your selected pieces.
So true. And I really want this piece to be criticized because it's the most time I've spent on a short story. If you could read it, that would be fantastic.